Hot Springs

Hot Springs

1.Finding the changing rooms

2.Playing with my family

3.Going for a feed

I jumped out of the shiny,white car. Mud angrily spits at me as I take a tiny step. Excitedly ambling to the pitch black toilets. I could hear a bunch of people screaming like a car screeching. My sore legs got worse like a person fainting. I screamed as loud as I could when I found the changing rooms. It was challenging to scream out loud I quietly replied back to my mind. It smells damp. Yuck! I finally got changed.

I looked around cautiously. Yay I found Ocean I was so anxious before But when I found Ocean It was all up to her if we should play or not. Why not Ocean replied back to me. Frantically sprinting to the pool nearby to me. My hair flopped up and down furiously like a lion chasing after it's prey. My hands were very wrinkled like a person getting very old. Smoothly touching my back as I calmly swim away.

My brother did a tremendous shout to me. The sun glistened in the clear sky as it moves around in it's own path. Gulp,gulp this is scrumptious I replied back to my sister as she takes a bite into her chewy meat. Yum! That's the best food I have ever eaten.

Lockdown Practice

LOCKDOWN PRACTICE

Wheeo,Wheeo,Wheeo, the bell silently came on. Mrs Hopewell couldn't hear it. My face went as red as a juicy apple. We all thought it was a real lockdown. Rapidly, we all ran down onto the dirty mat. Everybody was frightened. It was really dark it felt like we were sitting in a pitch black cave. My heart was pounding madly. I was scared. What is that sound? I was really anxious when everybody was silent. Jackson was holding the umbrella still. It was really pointy like a shark's tooth. Everybody was very frustrated. We all felt really,really bad. We all rushed up and everybody was all safe. They opened up all the blind in the delicate classroom. The sun shone into our charming classroom. Room 21 was peaceful at the end.

Off To The Beach

                        Off To The Beach

''I'm dying''.  I explained to my beautiful mum. I WANT TO GO TO THE BEACH! I feel like I am going to faint. The sun glistened in my eyes like a paua shell sitting on the shiny sand. Sweat slowly ran down my face like raindrops falling to the hard rocky ground. I explained to my mum can we go. ''Yes she'' said. Finally. 
Zoom off we go to the beach. '' I happily shouted''. I spotted the beach as we were driving yipe! It felt really bumpy when we were cruising. It felt like we were driving on the side of a volcano's side. Bump Bump. We just derived over the last bump. YAY! The car suddenly stopped.
Hot Hot! As I walked on the sand it was burning under my stinky feet. I quickly sprinted to the cold wet sand. Ahhh nice and freezing . I went for a walk and I found a mysterious treasure. It was a giant orange crab. It looked really spiky like a hedgehog. I was going to touch it but I didn't want it to nip me. I was running back happily FINALLY! I'm back.

Anzac Letter

     ANZAC LETTER

Dear my beloved family. My life is terrible here. I've been sitting here with mice they have been sleeping with us too. It is horrible here I can't believe it. The noise is so loud here. I'm missing you's I just want to come home. I've been also sleeping with dead soldiers to that have been shot. I did not want to leave when I was living with you's I always see smoke rising up in the air. This is really bad. Some of my friends have been shot I've been lying by them as I think about you's. I haven't eaten for days. 

                                                                   LOVE BY WAIPUNA

Using Personification

At Personification

The vicious sky claps and echoes angrily. The mischievous lightning tears open the pitch black sky. The bright lights climb from the clouds. 

The deadly beast jumps out of the ferocious water. 

The volcano spits out hot lava as the rest slides down it's side. The rough water swims fiercely down the stream. 

The old snowy tree slowly falling down onto the hard ground.

BY WAIPUNA

Autumn Day

Autumn Day

I tiptoe to the squeaky door. I take my firts step outside. I see water dripping from the tall roof. I carefully walk to the trees I could see colourful leaves dangling down from the rough branches. One feel as I took another step to the leaves. I found a crunchy old leaf lying on the ground. It watches me mysteriously as I walk by. Through the summer the sun makes the leaves more colourful. I quickly picked the leaf up and it was really cozy. I rapidly sprinted inside to show my family. It was very crispy.